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The bad: Music is too repetitive (not to mention "Taxi!"), not always clear what you can pass under/over and what causes damage. Nothing particularly new or interesting
The good: It's fine. It works.
If you're looking for "meh" and like parking type games ... sure. Go for it.
Very good. Just a heads up, I did everything right except for one thing (the method of taking the potion) and somehow got all 5 medals?
I *do* like adventure games like this ... but it was just too dull. Very little changes at any point in the game. Same randomly generated scenarios, same music, same options, same ... zzzz
But what is here is well-executed. So props for that.
Ok, honest feedback from an "old" man who's been playing music for a loooong time. Music means putting yourself out there which can be hard, but part of growing and improving as a musician is listening to constructive criticism and using it as a tool to improve. That is my intention here, to help you improve.
What it sounds like to me is that you found some cool sounds and loops you really liked and are playing them almost at random. At least the ones you chose fit well together, so that's a good thing. But if you want to make appealing music you're missing basics like a melody, chord structure, recognizeable tempo, etc.
Your profile just says "a kid," so I don't know how old you are which would make a huge difference if you're really young ... But here is my advice: 1. Don't quit. Don't let anything discourage you. Your heart is in the right place. Clearly you love making music; keep doing it, keep putting it out there. 2. Learn everything you can-- your head needs to catch up to your heart and your ears. Pay close attention to what exactly it is that you like about your favorite songs (you won't be able to put it into words at first, that's ok). Start learning about music theory, check out musictheory.net for example. Learn to play an instrument, take lessons from a trained teacher if you can afford it, etc. Piano is probably best because it will give you a foundation for other music/instruments, too. Go after learning about music with just as much passion and excitement as you have with listening to and making music and a year from now you'll be shocked at how much you've improved.
How about this? https://www.newgrounds.com/audio/listen/879420?updated=1566601965
4.5 Just because I felt like the piano only section at the beginning could be half as long, imo, for this to be relatively stand alone; I was starting to get bored before the rest of it kicked in ... and then it was all ear candy after that. Aaaah. Of course it would very much depend on how this was being used, and the lack of a real ending leads me to believe you'd expecting to adjust the length etc to whatever actual purpose it might be used for.
I can't say that I've listened to a majority of NG tracks or anything, but what I have heard ... I think this is the best orchestral piece I've heard on NG by some distance. Maybe it's just bias because I've heard you most recently, I don't know. But you're blowing me away, dude. I think you have a serious career ahead of you-- don't give up man.
A dad in Southern California. I don't have a website or anything, so if you want to get a hold of me you'll have to PM here on NG. Now get off my lawn!
Age 44, Male
California
Joined on 7/12/10
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